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Friday, October 26, 2007
EYES
EYES
When I am with you
My time flies talking with you
To say I talk a lot
But the thing I want to say is not said
You love me or not I don’t know
But your eyes filled with love says a lot
That you too love me, but
You consent of not saying this
Sometimes you too get in to thoughts
You change for asking
You too have spent nights
Remembering me
My mind blushes thinking so
You may not say right away to me
But your eyes filled with love says a lot
When I am with you
My time flies talking with you
To say I talk a lot
But the thing I want to say is not said
You love me or not I don’t know
But your eyes filled with love says a lot
That you too love me, but
You consent of not saying this
Sometimes you too get in to thoughts
You change for asking
You too have spent nights
Remembering me
My mind blushes thinking so
You may not say right away to me
But your eyes filled with love says a lot
Gurati Version
Hu jyare tari saathe huv chu,
Vaato vaato ma samay vahi jaiche
Kehva mate to ghani vaato karu chu
Pan je kehvu che tej rahi jaiche
Tu prem kare che ke nahi te nathi jaanto
Pan tari prem bhari aankho ghanu kahi jaiche
Ke tu pan mane chahe che pan
Na kehvani becheni pan sahi jaiche
Kyarek tu pan khovay jaiche vicharo ma
Puchu to fari jaiche
Raato vitavi hoysh kadach
Tu pan mari yaad ma
Evu vichari man harkhay jaiche
Tu bhale spasht kai na kahe mane
Pan tari aa premal aankho ghanu khai jaiche
Vaato vaato ma samay vahi jaiche
Kehva mate to ghani vaato karu chu
Pan je kehvu che tej rahi jaiche
Tu prem kare che ke nahi te nathi jaanto
Pan tari prem bhari aankho ghanu kahi jaiche
Ke tu pan mane chahe che pan
Na kehvani becheni pan sahi jaiche
Kyarek tu pan khovay jaiche vicharo ma
Puchu to fari jaiche
Raato vitavi hoysh kadach
Tu pan mari yaad ma
Evu vichari man harkhay jaiche
Tu bhale spasht kai na kahe mane
Pan tari aa premal aankho ghanu khai jaiche
18 Comments:
very nice...keep it up...
Beautiful! Take care.
The eyes filled with loved is always thirsty.
Hi Vikas,
Poem on anticipation of your lady love ;)
Good post!
At times vn words cannot express feelings, the gesture of eyes fill in artistically....
Love,Live,Laughter
Lust4Life
Hello Vikas! How are you my dear friend? This is a beautiful poem...yes, the eyes often speak of the depths of the soul...and the longing of the heart. Although when we desire, sometimes it is not clear, when looking into another's eyes, if we see into the heart of another or into our own illusion...
much love to you, sweet Vikas! And I love the version in Gurati.
kiss for you!
MUUUUUAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!
chetu----
thanks a lot :)
Take Care
Vikas{V}
venu---
thanks friend :)
Take Care
Vikas{V}
lust4life----
very true eyes speaks a lot than words. :)
Take Care
Vikas{V}
priya--
yes thats true. Its ocean of thirst which never gets satisfied :)
Take Care
Vikas{V}
Ana ---
Hello Ana !! I am good dear and nice to hear from u sweetieee :)
Yes ana thats true eyes speaks depth of ur heart and feelings..Just like ur display pic speaks lot abt u ;)
I am glad u liked my gujrati version., I think u knew this languauge :)
MUAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH KISSSSEEESSSSSSSSSSSSS for you dear friend
Eyes are the true of speaker of feelings...you have captured it beautifully..
Good one.
I too believe that eyes speak a lot.
GBU and JSK
Arti
wow..!!
beautiful..!!
mona---
yeh ur true buddy,,eyes speaks true words :)
hope and love ---
Thanks friend
Take Care
Vikas{V}
Arti----
Ok
JSK N GBU
WOWWWWWW 1 more blog with lots of poetry in it. gr88888.
hey nice poem fren. "eyes" is 1 of my fav. topic also. eyes spk a lot. v just need 2 feel it. lovely poem n beautiful templt.
thnx 4 visiting mine n also 4 ur sweet encouraging commnt. do visit agn. m blogrolling u..ok.
tk cr n kp smiling
:) :) :)
preetilata---
yes u said right. Welcome to my world and keep visiting.
It was my pleasure to visit ur world and would love to come again and again
Take Care
Vikas{V}
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