Coming Back To Life
Monday, October 08, 2007
NOT ME
The Day rises and disappears
I am not the star,
Get into deep sleep in the dawn of night
I am not the candle light,
With day light; fades my light and hides behind cloud
I am not the moon
I am not the fragrance, which fades with flower
I am crazy about you , not deceiver
I am not my heart's criminal nor prisoner
Except you , there is no one else love
I am not the star,
Get into deep sleep in the dawn of night
I am not the candle light,
With day light; fades my light and hides behind cloud
I am not the moon
I am not the fragrance, which fades with flower
I am crazy about you , not deceiver
I am not my heart's criminal nor prisoner
Except you , there is no one else love
16 Comments:
Awwww, the last line is outstanding....
""Except you , there is no one else love""
Keep it up :D
Love,Live,Laughter
Lust4Life
You express your adoration..
In the twinkle in your eye..as a star,
In the gleam of moon.. on a dark night,
In the dance of a flame.. as a lone candle,
In the vision of a bloom..as a feast fir sight,
In a heart brimming with affection...
Yet you say… “Not Me” !!!
Wat a lovely one ther Vikas. Everytign disappears when u see in each others eyes isn't it.
lust4life--------
Thanks buddt :) last line is state of mind .
Take Care
Vikas{V}
deepa----
ahh is that so ??
words are wonderful friend
Take Care
Vikas{V}
pria---
thanks!!!
you are right , every pain dissapears :)
Take Care
Vikas{V}
Hi Buddy,
Nice words..
Just make me that light,which keeps the hope of love alive.
very nice words really....!!..keep it up...write more N more..!!
Beautiful..
aint we all in search of that eternal emotion called "Love" which becomes our strength and weakness...
Keep writing :)
Preetha
puneet---
thanks buddy.keep romancing buddy ;)
Take Care
Vikas{V}
chetu --
thanks a lot :)
Take Care
Vikas{V}
preetha--
welcome buddy : yes ur right we all are in same boat
Thanks a lot
Take Care
Vikas{V}
Hi Vikas,
So finally im here...
Nothing to say about these words..bcoz some words are beyond any boundaries and that is what you have written here...
beautiful! the words and the image go together perfectly! just lovely...!
Mona---
Thanks and glad u liked it..You are right some words are beyond imagination :)
Take Care
Vikas{V}
Ana--
Thanks a lot ana :)
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