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Wednesday, March 18, 2009

Happiness Of Our Meet


Why are you starring from far?
Come lets enjoy happiness of our meet,
Lets hold each other’s hand, in lush green garden,
And whisper in love.
Lets be pair of birds and fly in blue sky.
Me moon and you light,
Lets shine in sky.
Lets hide behind clouds and play hide and seek.
Lets be innocent kids,
Play game of house.
Lets fight with each other,
Enjoy the happiness of being annoyed with each other.
Lets go far away from this jealous world,
And make our own new world.
Lets dip our selves in flow of love,
And enjoy the sweet taste of love.
Life is very short,
Today’s it’s shinning, tomorrow it will turn dull,
We have got this precious life,
Let celebrate the occasion of life.

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posted by Life at Wednesday, March 18, 2009

12 Comments:

Wow! A wonderful write from you. Very positive. Loved it much. I am doing good. Thank you. Hope the very same with you. Hugs!

Wed Mar 18, 05:27:00 PM 2009  

ehmmmmm very romantic;-) i liked very mych vikas :)very sensitive, i want to run away to weeeeeeee
kisses

Thu Mar 19, 05:06:00 AM 2009  

nice

but vikas u hv disappointed me this time dear. u write far better than this.
:(

4th line is not at all good friend.

otherwise u are a good poet. i hope u wont mind my words. hope 2 see u back with a bang.

take care. :)

Thu Mar 19, 11:22:00 AM 2009  

venus----

thanks friend....love always turns u positive..right???

i am also fine

Hugs!
Vikas{V}

Fri Mar 20, 06:13:00 AM 2009  

soul----

thanks buddy....yeh celebrate ever going festival called love :)

kisses
Vikas{V}

Fri Mar 20, 06:14:00 AM 2009  

pree----

hmm sorry for disappointing you friend....

and no i never mind good sugestions from friends...these sugestions helps to be much better...

well i have made bit changes in 4th line...let me know ...

take care
Vikas{V}

Fri Mar 20, 06:16:00 AM 2009  

it was a beautiful one, i dont know what preeti meant about the 4th line but it seems ok to me.. did you change it?

Tue Mar 31, 05:19:00 AM 2009  

hello lena--

thanks friend.

yeh i did make changes in fourth line...:)

Take Care
Vikas{V}

Wed Apr 01, 12:17:00 AM 2009  

Good one.....

Smiles :)
Prashant

Sat Apr 11, 09:33:00 PM 2009  

Prashant---

Thanks friend and welcome to my world.
:)

Take Care
Vikas{V}

Sun Apr 12, 08:43:00 AM 2009  

Hello. And Bye.

Thu Mar 04, 06:49:00 AM 2010  

Nice :))


Love Ritz
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Thu May 27, 11:18:00 PM 2010  

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